Pretty good, but I feel it lacks atmosphere and bass, which in my opinion are mandatory. If possible, I'd like you to add some reverb as well.
If you're new to NG, I need to tell you that you're always able to update a project to add some improvements. There's no need to resubmit. (BTW the song you've remixed is actually called Djjaner - Sparkler, not Killbot)
[/ Notmyfault \]